Hey, I haven't yet had a chance to actually look at the video, so this reply is without any further context that might be gleaned from that.
Thank you for giving it a go of course, and yes, not a native speaker, so fighting the errors is going to be one of the main challenges. I didn't immediately want to employ hours and hours of my friend's time for an uncertain project, so I've tried to sort things out with the tools I've available to pick up typos, grammar errors, etc.
It's absolutely one of the main issues, and one I'm keenly aware of, though.
And yes, characters already have other things planned with them that are meant to get them away from their first impression. But we'll see how it goes as that will depend on how well I can handle that part.
Hope that will be good, might be a trash fire, but time will tell!