Ok, so review time!
That was a nice 10 mins, but I'm just desperate for more good vn content, you can't starve me like this-
I mean I'm avidly waiting for the continuation!
Anyways, I really liked this demo so far, there's music that comes with the situations, which feels just so appropriate, like I don't know how you find this stuff, the tense panic-inducing sound as Koharu asks for the truth, before the sudden lighthearted shift after is just-
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Also, that's the loveliest lunch bell I've ever heard. The one on my school just threatens to rip out your eardrums with noise.
Additionally, I'd like to start paying you for your superb humor coz your comedy is just killing me 'if she asks me to jump I'd ask how high', 'about to be free from this mortal coil', 'LIES ESPECIALLY ON TAXES'-
I could not physically stop the laugh at 4 in the morning, and I might've woken up a few people, but those lines were just hilarious.
Unrelated rant on the chess game...but I feel like Komori(n) would play a standard game, king's pawn, since she feels like a passive player, maybe she gets out a standard development, with a slightly closed position on her end, but eventually blunders her queen to a fork. While Koharu definitely played something open, maybe a Scandinavian? Then sacrificing her pawns to open up the board, as I feel Komori(n) probably hasn't really learned about tactics yet (though tbh, neither have I).
Unrelated Unrelated, but even tho I really liked the GUI (its very pretty), the buttons aren't too clear, if it wouldn't be too much of a bother, could you have like a label cg at the start to like clarify things for people with poor pattern recognition- but I managed to figure it out eventually so maybe it's just a me thing. I liked the style!
Also I expected a selfie pic cg, it isn't there ;-;
I'll be waiting on this to finish, but no pressure, it'll be around a month or two till I have enough free time and privacy to do another visual novel.
Great work!