I'm trying to get through this one, honestly, cause the intro got me hooked on the story and I want to see it to the end but...
It's gotten SO wordy, like, I like a healthy portion of dialog, but there's so much repetition and over explaining that I just find myself skipping through so much of it trying to get to the meat of the interaction before I lose it. I don't want to rip too much, cause it's not like there's not good dialog in here, and the meat of the story is good, good enough to press on, but it just gets lost and bogged down in word salads and fLuff