Oh my ghad thank you for everything!! Sorry for not updating lately... Your reply did not discourage me at all in fact, it made me realize my mistakes and laugh at myself. I really appreciate someone telling me what to improve because that means they care about me or my story (in my own opinion let me dream alright.. ). Thanks for thinking highly of this story but I am sorry to break this I would love to continue it but I don't think I can right now. It is because of my laptop ( the one I'm using to type this and comfortably use) broke and I don't have anything to use to continue it (I was actually have another story to post and was refining this story, removing ellipses and checking grammars at grammarly ps. I LOVE YOU GRAMMARLY but my laptop sadly shows red screen and all. Good thing I have my good ole USB for saving the stories before it became like that. This is the reason why I can't post and update it yet.) I don't know if I can still fix it It's been with me for 6 or 9 years so the screen starts leaking something idk... So my plan for now was to postpone this story and continue this after I have my job to buy myself brand new laptop or have enough money to repair it. Unfortunately, Its a very long year and process to wait. So maybe when I get back to this story, my writings will be boring and the story will be different. Imean- I need to graduate from grade 12 (my year right now with my friend Thesis and research I HATE THEM!!) and take my collage course so yup looooonggg way to go.. I will not promise anything because who knows what will happen right? But all I can say is that I WILL TRY to continue this when opportunities make it. So for now, I will take your suggestions and corrections at my heart and hope you will be here when I come back again to continue this story. Anyways Thank you again and Lab yah bradah Happy hearts day!