I like the storyline and the twist at the end is good. The sounds for the car are really good but it doesn't match the feel of the game in my opinion as the cars don't feel like they're moving as fast as they sound and you don't get to see the crash happen on screen. I also think deer walking across the road would be a bit better than bollards but it's still good having to dodge something. The sounds and story are what's important for this round and I think you've done a pretty decent job there