Ok... where to start...
I loved your first round entry! it gave me chills, it made me wonder what would happen next... i was hungry for more! and then i played your round 2 entry... the first thought, that came to mind... awe he didn't have time to work on this huh...
Look i loved what you added! fantastic. but i understand that time was not on your side here. still, what you did manage to add. made me still want more! here's hoping you manage to move onto the 3rd round, don't worry I gave you a high rating :)