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An interesting short game, very vibey!

My playthrough: 

(SPOILERS BELOW)

My thoughts on the game:

  • I really liked the inclusion of the spider and it's metaphoric value, great job!
  • The game is extremely vibey with the looks and sound effects, I liked it.
  • For improvement, I think the door that opens/closes constantly could be optimized a bit by making it open only when you're further away from it and close only when you're close to it, so it can't be spammed.
  • The voice acting is great, I loved it!
  • It's a little unclear where and which beer bottles you have to grab, maybe a glow like on the spider would help.
  • Would've been cool to see some stars at the beginning of the game when it turns dark, and to have maybe fog at the top of the hills so it makes a little more sense with the lighting.
  • I recommend adding an outline to text as white on white can be hard to read, especially when you click on the door. (Example image below)


Overall, as much as I tried thinking of feedback notes for this game, the game as it is pretty much nails it! Incredible job, I enjoyed every bit of it :)

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Thank you for playing and for the notes! I really appreciate you taking the time to write down notes / bugs. If I decide to go back to it to fix some of this things I'll definitely do, there's some other (like the stars) that'll be a bit over my coding knowledge because I tried to add them the first time and didn't manage to do it haha. Thanks again :)