Hey, had fun trying out your game. I think it had potential for sure!
Some things I noticed incase you wanted to keep working on it:
- The ball is so bright I was seeing it on the walls of my house after I got up :P
- You can jump on certain small objects (like the torch on the wall) and then climb up on the wall itself and move around/see everything (not sure if that was intentional)
- The game didn't have a UI/way to tell the player what to do so I got lost a few times
- The NPC had too much text (IMO). Players often will skip the text and not read it when there's that much.
Overall, nice game, good job!