Honestly, absolutely loved the game! I really liked Mychael and the feeling the narration/story gave. The art is also sooooo good!!
This next opinion kinda differs from what someone else said, but I think it would help if you put a small preview of Mychael in the pics that show the game since I almost skipped this gem because of that (thankfully I didn't!!). Character design is kinda important for me (and I'm sure some other people) so when I don't see the character (especially in something """romance""" themed, quotes cuz this is yandere stuff lol) it kinda lessens my interest and I'm worried some people might make that mistake with this game. I completly understand if you don't wanna change it or anything, just wanted to give my suggestion of what I think may attract more people, but it is your game after all and you should go with what you have envisioned as the author <3
Much love, I'll be patiently waiting for the finished game!~