I hope you don't mind, but I figure I'll make some comments here as I play. I do really like the game, but there are a few things I wanted to note. ^_^
The scene with Violet & her BF at the start is probably out of place... It feels like it belongs after we meet Violet.
I think Act 1 could use a narrator. Scenes begin and end abruptly and the transition is rough, but a narration might help to make things flow better. If possible the 'X days later' messages should probably be done as a transition scene. Like a calendar advancing through the days.
Some of the text tends suggest you've had sex with a guy "I have had sex before, so I've seen a cock before", which seems awkward if you selected having a lesbian sexual experience before.
In the pool locker room the game suggests 'Rita' has never enjoyed female attention before... But she slept with a female friend in HS.
In the kiss scene with Haruka it suggests Rita hasn't kissed another girl... But that's only true if she's a 'virgin'.