coming back to this but i really enjoyed this poem, and when i first saw it i was really inspired to make my own twine poetry and used it for reference (none of mine are done, unfortunately). it's really well made and evocative
hey, would it be alright if i posted a link to this game on https://ifdb.org/ ? it's the interactive fiction database, and has tons of other twine games, along with parsers and other interactive fiction. i think it would be nice if more of the interactive fiction community took a look at it.