I think I would say I didn't quite fully develop the whole piece in the musical sense of the word development, where things are added in and it builds and those things are related to each other. The intention is definitely for it to build up. I'll have to think more carefully about doing that, especially because that's what allows a song to be repetitive without the repetitiveness becoming grating.
I like the idea of some punchier drums. The context here is that Bombur is the drummer (lol)
Good feedback! Thank you!