I love the style and characters in this game, and the pixel art is great! It also fits my tastes really well without really being too sexual (even if I like my fetish games I dislike when they are sexual much). Regardless of my own likes I think this is a really well-made game. It does feel a little content-sparse right now, with most the residents only having 1 line with no options for a character response, many rooms having no purpose or being very repetitive, and only a few traps to fall into. I only have 1 star right now and got to the part with the dolls, but the tasks are already starting to feel repetitive and I can imagine if nothing changes it will feel worse up to max stars. Also, some of the conversations confuse me, like when the cat at the desk says I could meet my friends after I get done with work but I couldn't find them anywhere, and it took a little bit of doing more tasks for them to appear again. In general I'd just suggest adding more content - unlockable rooms, unique character interactions especially during tasks (which could include unique tasks), unique hypnosis challenges, ect. Personally I'd also like some more hypnosis content that isn't just task challenges, (maybe more story hypnosis, or hypnosis involving the roleplay with friends?), buts that just me.
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thanks a bunch! content is definitely something i would love to expand on if i continue work, and the idea of unlockable rooms is a big one for me. i would very much like if cherry's friends had more of a presence outside of cutscenes too. i like the suggestion about different hypnosis content! that's something i hadn't considered much and it would be cool to see what else i could do with it!