I may have just gotten lost because I'm rushing to review everything, so I'm clicking through the text before I had a chance to think about it. If there are 2 different new concepts referenced at once, I don't fully catch what the sentence was about before moving on. I don't think the writing will be confusing to someone who's sitting down to fully enjoy it and especially if they're already familiar with the world and characters. I'm also the type of player who likes making choices and remember things better in VN games when I do. It's almost certainly just a target audience mismatch with me rather than anything being wrong with the story.