Thank you for the comment! I really appreciate that you took the time to write your thoughts :)
The art direction turned out better than I expected given the necessity of it, haha. I didn’t have time in February to sit down and draw, but even if I did, there’s a charm to filtered backgrounds. Plus, the perk of using background photos is that I can have as many as I want.
May I ask which parts specifically you got lost or confused by? As I’m writing the final script, it would be helpful to know where to go back and explain. Although, my kinetic novels have no choices because I like them that way. It’s a different experience than a traditional game but that’s not necessarily a bad thing.
Glad you found a sense of unity overall, and thank you for the in-depth feedback!