Really good looking and sounding game excellent work on that front! The writing is super engaging, loved all the effort you all put into each character and story element. This could definitely be a publishable game with a little bit of polish!
Only thing that threw me off was how the text boxes for the ghost people functioned. If two ghosts stack on top of each other the game doesn't know which one to show making it hard to read. I also had trouble reading through all of the text when the ghost would move and the text box would go away. Maybe just change it to a click ghost to focus in on, ghost text box appears, click off box to close it or something like that rather than the hover.
Excellent work!