The writing would already be impressive by itself, but all-custom art too? This is a lot of work to do in a month, even for a two-person team. The apartment seems nice and cozy, and the two main characters are cute and have very unique designs. The unique biology(?) of the two characters also comes up in a lot of small ways, which I thought was great.
Your project features a good mix of plot, emotional stuff, and horny. It's a small-scale, slow-paced, emotionally driven experience, and I think you got that pretty much exactly right.
One small bit of criticism: I found some of the text a little hard to read. The contrast between text and background isn't super high, and it's in all-caps. A lot of that comes down to personal preference, though, and it was never a big problem.
Overall, I had a really good time with your kinetic novel, and I'd love to see more from the characters and the setting.