Thank you! "Weird sci-fi" is a neat genre to write in, and I'm glad it made a good impression. Now that the jam is over, I'm currently working on the full game, which will expand on the story introduced in the demo :)
The tonal difference seems to be an acquired taste between people, haha. I do like the acronyms... looking at the story as a whole, not just the demo, it kind of works! I might be more deliberate on where I use "BALLS" versus "the ship," though.