Thank you! "Weird sci-fi" is a neat genre to write in, and I'm glad it made a good impression. Now that the jam is over, I'm currently working on the full game, which will expand on the story introduced in the demo :)
The tonal difference seems to be an acquired taste between people, haha. I do like the acronyms... looking at the story as a whole, not just the demo, it kind of works! I might be more deliberate on where I use "BALLS" versus "the ship," though.
Thank you for the comment! I really appreciate that you took the time to write your thoughts :)
The art direction turned out better than I expected given the necessity of it, haha. I didn’t have time in February to sit down and draw, but even if I did, there’s a charm to filtered backgrounds. Plus, the perk of using background photos is that I can have as many as I want.
May I ask which parts specifically you got lost or confused by? As I’m writing the final script, it would be helpful to know where to go back and explain. Although, my kinetic novels have no choices because I like them that way. It’s a different experience than a traditional game but that’s not necessarily a bad thing.
Glad you found a sense of unity overall, and thank you for the in-depth feedback!
