Good job on the music and image. If you are going for interactive fiction, you can definitely go further with it. Even if you have the next pages as just solid color with text, you can use Scratch code to set up a story structure and make it interactive. You can always start with unpolished text and refine it after you've got the basic outline. You can learn a lot by trying it out and seeing what happens!
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Yeah, I think renpy and twine are better for VNs and interactive fiction, but good job experimenting. Scratch is cool if you want to program a greater variety of actions and still make your own art and sound. It really does a good job of giving one person the ability to create many types of things relatively easily.