You might want to create more than just 1 minute's worth of content before releasing a POC. First impressions are important and this just screams "Give me money" without actually giving me a reason to want to.
That aside, I recommend some fairy Onahole action as well as some cumflation, since those are quite rare but pair together really nicely.
I look forward to seeing what you release next, and hopefully, it's much more fleshed out.