Hit them with a book? Is that a critique or a compliment?
Doesn’t sound like a compliment to me, unfortunately.
there is a problem with repeating words such as (mate/children) in some dialogues, and as far as i can tell its not intentional so its practically a tautology
Thanks for the feedback.
sorry if first reply sounded a little rude, i did't really mean it )
it's all good
