The art is really top-notch, not mention the plot! You build a whole new world and make it so interesting! I feel like I'm reading a manhwa. <3 Besides feartures that I favor (wandering around listening to all gossips and make it a discusstion topic, date and get to touch our date), I surprisingly don't feel anything toward the guys? They are gorgeous, that's unquestionable, but we are lacking interactions and meaningful encounters to get to know or feel anything I guess? XD and I would like their reactions (including the MC) to get described as much details as possible. I think your strong point lies with active conversations, and they feel natural, but the lacking of inner thought and reactions makes the encounter not as emotional as I hope.
Thank u for the compliments and input. Totally agree on the latter half of ur comment cuz I admit I lack emotional description (because im dead inside) but in all seriousness, I get what u mean since my day job is as a manhwa scriptwriter and I used to be a video ad scriptwriter/social media copywriter. Hence, I write ok-ish dialogue, but shitty thought descriptions or write none at all lol.
Don't know if that aspect will be better in the full game, but it's something I do plan and try to take note of when writing the game atm ^ ^