Thank u for the compliments and input. Totally agree on the latter half of ur comment cuz I admit I lack emotional description (because im dead inside) but in all seriousness, I get what u mean since my day job is as a manhwa scriptwriter and I used to be a video ad scriptwriter/social media copywriter. Hence, I write ok-ish dialogue, but shitty thought descriptions or write none at all lol.
Don't know if that aspect will be better in the full game, but it's something I do plan and try to take note of when writing the game atm ^ ^