Starts out a little clunky... the pacing is a bit fast in the beginning, but after you progress, it smooths out and gets really good.
OK, I've played this 3 times. Once for each girl ... Nikki, Mary, then finally Erin and I'm absolutely in love with Erin... I was going to rate this a 3, maybe a 4 ... but after the Erin story arc, I upped it to a 5. I absolutely love this one.
I see several similarities (story wise) to Leap Of Faith by Drifty. I'm very anxious for the next update.
Keep up the great work!