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I didn't see a survey so I just filled out some notes as I went
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hzvUegu-Lo7EbEAuMxfagfhcnQEy23d9/view?usp=shari...

Wolfheart's 3rd line of dialogue reads, as copied from the dialogue, "and Mitter has come though his horse has since died.", not "through his horse has died." Does that make more grammatical sense?

the English language is a fickle one

On that I agree! I also tried to find a line where Aquila mentions having a son. He does talk about some other man, Artox, having a son named Maestus: "No, he was slain by his own son, Maestus..."

But if it's another line, and you can find/remember it, that would be appreciated! It is probably misappropriated. Aquila is indeed supposed to be young, so you're not quite off when you say he looks 17!

Thanks for the feedback anyways!

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the notes were taken in order of when I noted them, so possibly in-between chapter 3 and 4