If you make it bionic eye, wouldn't it like hurt so much? Or have already you made a story where the main character eye got wounded and replaced with the bionic eye? Maybe make it a contact lense instead of an actual eye cyborg would be better
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It was just an idea. While the major plot points are set and I won't be changing them, minor details might be changed.
I have an intro section pre-planned. You start in Russia. You wake up, eat your breakfast and go play with your friends. Police then shows up and arrests you and your parents. You spend few days in a cell and then get put onto a ship with your parents. Before the ship arives at Sinathir, the prisoners rebel and try to escape. They all die, your parents included, but you stay alive. You get a letter some other prisoner was supposed to get and your task is to give it to Mr. White. If you do so, you will be set free.
What I wrote is set in stone and I won't be changing that. However, I will be adding and changing minor details.
Maybe you got a high-tech contact lense as a birthday gift the morning you got arrested,
Maybe you got cought in the crossfire on that ship and your eye got damaged and since you are a child, they took pitty on you and gave you cheap bionic eye.
Maybe when the prisoners were fighting, you managed to steal the PDA from some dead soldier. Or maybe you got it together with the letter.