You have solid game art and character animations, i won't comment on font, a lot of others already said what I have on mind. I can see how this could be interesting story driven, station exploration game with unlockable powers that lets you progress further, but I guess from the dev note (which I couldn't read through) you had to skip to the best bits that you had. Nice try, I liked what I saw, good luck in the future if you decide to keep working on it!