Hello! I was one of the streamers who took part in Feedback Quest, and I'm here to leave some comments I had while playing.
To begin, I will say that I do love the art style. It's adorable and works very well for a visual novel.
However, I did notice a lot of errors in the writing; typos or wrong just of words or weird sentences. At times, it made it hard to follow. I will admit that these errors drove me to not play a lot of the game.
I also found it weird that Nora immediately requests the player character to call her Nora, even though "Nora" is not in her name whatsoever (also because giving a nickname like this is not something that normally happens when Japanese people first meet).
That said, I will be watching for updates to this game that hopefully tackle the writing issue so that I can play more of it and give more solid feedback during the next Feedback Quest.
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Thank you for your comments. I will work hard to correct any problems you have seen. As for the English language, it is not native English. I am very sorry if there are errors in the English language, I will communicate to my translator the errors. Any feedback on the English translation will serve as experience so thank you very much for your comment :D
Regarding the nickname “Nora” thank you very much for your comment, I will correct it for version 2.0.