I feel like you have a really solid foundational piece that could be improved significantly with some better mixing. Tonal balance is something to really keep in mind, as the bass overpowers the rest of the track imo. Maybe also consider some creative use of sidechaining or LFOs on the bass. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you for your comment Quintivium, yeah I kind of bodged up the bass a little bit but didn't realise that until I had already submitted it so that's on me for not testing it on other speakers beforehand.. I'm unfamiliar with sidechaining but it's certainly something I can learn and play around with for next time!