It's going to be hard to be original in my review.
The melody is pretty (as it often is), it's sweet and cute, and it's too short (as it often is).
It's a shame, you have a nice theme, it's worth developing.
Well, I add a challenge for you for the next jam : a music of minimum 2 min with 2 themes in the AABA form. Do you accept? Come on, say you accept!