Hi I was part of the Feedback Quest. The VOD for me playing this on Stream is up.
Normally I'd save my conclusions for later, but for this, I'll say it straight up. You did not need to go so hard and far on this. Even for a DEMO I felt like it was a full fledged game. Like I was floored and kept playing and if I didn't have other games to play, I might have stuck on this forever.
The Story was interesting, the characters were likeable, the UI does feel a bit dated, reminds me of old UIs from AQ Studio games from their online flash games but still, solid. Just, it was a pure plesure to play this game.
My only critisims would be from a visual stand point. The backgrounds are clearly 3D rendered and does not meld well with the art of the game itself. I'd suggest either getting an artist to do it, put a paint filter over it, maybe just blur it slightly when the characters are on screen. Just something to make me not fully notice the clear low poly details in the background. There's also some Audio balancing issues like the sound effects not sounding quite right, some of the voices felt different.
Still despite that, I could not help by get immersed. The sheer understanding of the medium is on full display here. This is the Standard I feel for what a VN should strive to be. I dare say, this is the Gold Standard. Please keep up the amazing work and I look forward to playing more.