oh my God, with much adoration, I’m going to say that it’s beautifully written!
I don't have much to say but, you, author, did a great job delivering the intense yet somewhat melancholic atmosphere. I’m at edge most times while exploring the unique world you’ve written here. Thank you kindly for sharing this work with us.
p.s. I’m becoming fond of Faren, his competitive spirit is charming (giggles)