I think this would benefit from having multiple options to choose in more of the passages. Since a lot of the passages only have one option, it feels like you're clicking just to advance the story, which is a bit less engaging than when you are faced with decisions that alter the course of gameplay. I noticed that some passages just have page numbers as the clickable links. I think it could be interesting if you changed these and utilized them as part of the story (like the "what do you do?" one)