OMG YOU ARE THE PERsOn WHo made that game My Master's birthday So cool to see ya again
The FAJH BRacin???? FAH BRACCINI??? Translator too :DD I mean, uh, the VN is very nice and I loved the characters, my faves are Gloria, Alfonso and the maid (Yes, I like her so much I don't know her name)
Sorry If I am weird, i guess the characters rubbed off on me hehe
Here are some typos I found:
Shouldn't it be "hear"?
Shouldn't it be "an answer" instead of "and answer"?
Shouldn't it be "both times"?
Also, I love how these typos are all together xD It's like you were tired while writing this part (I can relate) (I just realized Fah Braccini did the writing, eae kkkkk eu tenho uma pergunta se tu tiver lendo isso e quiser responder, com o que você escreve? Eu uso o bloco de notas do windows mas é muito claro aí eu tou querendo trocar)
I didn't save before the credits so I couldn't read them correctly (which made going to the page and realizing Fah Braccini was here and that bosimba made "My master's birthday" all the more cool heh) and also, I think being able to give different potions and get different results (Or in the case of the maid who is knowledgeable about potions, just annoy her) would be cool although hard to implement (especially considering the time limit for NaNoRenO, sticking with a linear vn was definitely the right choice considering it)
PS: I think the UI and the design of the potions was really well done