I see you went with a similar 'jazzy chords' approach as I did. Now, I am not sure whether I just don't like jazzy chords, but I am not a fan of your nor my own chords! I guess my ears are just not 'advanced' enough (whatever that means).
I do like your approach! It is soft, gentle, fitting the elevator theme. And that 'instrument' you introduce at 0:32 is really your thing, isn't it? It is that weird 'cat-like' instrument that I hear back in lots of your songs!
Overall, nice entry! I like how it kinda follows a story.