Ahh you noticed! Yeah I made the effort on taking your advice and simplified my melody to make it easier for the listener to follow, what you showed me did help a lot and I'm glad you like it! 😊
I got a little hung up on the 2nd section that I didn't think of putting in variations for the first section, oops.. It certainly wouldnt of gone a miss for sure especially with it being a lengthy one. Nonetheless, thank you so much for your feedback, it's very much appreciated!