This is a cute little game, although I think some improvements could be made to the presentation.
The way the whole book disappears and appears again when going to the next page is really distracting. The overall layout is odd. I'd prefer if the book took up more real estate, and though I sort of get that this is going for a storytime feel the combination of black background and random clipart is more unsettling than cozy.
I also saw some text that was cut off (after eating, I think).
The story isn't really my cup of tea, but I think it does the sort of cute and charming thing it's going for pretty well. Maybe it could use some copy editing. Some of the phrasing was odd, and possible incorrect, but I wasn't really going through as a proofreader. But the overall structure was fine.
Answering the the feedback questions: Like I said, I think does a good job of what it's trying to be but it's not really the sort of thing I'm into. I somewhat enjoyed it, but probably won't come back for more later.