Typos & writing suggestions:
CHP1
-cities --> city
-not ever --> never
-escapeon --> escape on
-your in --> in your
- sublte --> subtle
- site --> sight
- acromatic --> achromatic
- supplies --> suppliers
- where --> wear
- removed extra a
I love you for this. I'll keep making fixes when I get back from work, but I really really want to convey how grateful I am that you took the time out of your day to help me with this. Truly and sincerely thank you!