Absolutely commendable writing and interpersonal monologues, too. The character's inner turmoil was palatable and relatable as well. By far the best, and most adorable, visual novel I've read and highly recommend to anyone who hasn't seen it.
The sprites were very expressive and conveyed the emotions perfectly. It was easy to follow how exactly the character felt during the moment.
I also wanted to say that it was amazing to see more facets of queer life explored and given great detail as well as the characters being older, too.
Is there any way to donate? That's how amazing the short story was because it deserves as much support as possible for the amount of love and craft that went into it.