I get the retro theme being applied to graphics style, which is lovely, but I hope there is also some sounds to give it more life. Choices doesn't seem to matter, as it always lead to the same plot, at least for what I tried. I did not finish the second run. I hope there is a way to skip the dialogue or at least skip the text animation.
Other than that, congrats.
Edit: My bad. There are sounds. And nice story.