This is excellent! Very polished (spotted only 2 typos), intriguing story, great art! I know very little about Vampire the Masquerade, but this is written in such a way that it doesn't matter. The Glossary was nice for lore, but I actually rarely used it, as this was so easy to follow. Very nicely done!
One possible criticism I had was
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After the killings at the end, there wasn't much emotion. It was basically: well, that's too bad, let's move on. I guess I wouldv'e liked a bit more of Mikael dealing with each death. But it's a minor point. :)
I also wasn't sure why Kira suddenly was prosecutor, but I probably just missed something, lol.