The level looks great and I was excited to see a semicolon used in a sentence.
Ran into some bugs though: You can turn around upon entering the Red Rocket and walk off into the void. There's a chance for an enemy to get stuck in the Red Rocket staircase which blocks progression. When going to the Red Rocket as Drake there's a possibility to bypass the alley entrance trigger and get the title drop dialog from Daisy at the door. There's a possibility that Acid won't speak to you, which may be related to the previous bug. And, long-hair-knife-guy has a pixel missing from the penis area.
It took three tries to make it past the bugs, but it held my attention anyway because it's by far one of the more engaging entries.