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For what its worth, right out the gate, the story kept me engaged and created the scenario of a sole survivor and his struggles being alone. The narrative is very clear so far with my only minor confusion was why the fighting started but I'm assuming will be cleared up in the future which does create that "want" to see how this all happens.


For the art, yes artists do deserve their credit and AI generated stuff is super common these days. It's pretty hard to come up with all the funds to have talented individuals put together everything, especially if the project isn't being fully self earning and requires the funds to come out of pocket. Make it work however you need to without compromising your values.


As a whole, I really look forward to seeing how this story goes and do hope to see it to its completion. In terms of any other critiques or reviews about it, a couple grammatical mistakes, but nothing super major. Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update 😀 

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Thank you! Indeed the reason behind why there was a war that ended humanity will be explained down the road along with a lot of other mysteries like how the MC ended up on earth, how are they a native to Lycania etc.  Explanation about the war itself will happen through flashback stories the MC tells people or his dreams. There's lots of things where stuff happens but I try not to give away too much story so soon. I'm expecting this to be a pretty lengthy read. So far half of chapter 1 is the only thing completed. 

I agree with you completely on the art aspect of things. If I had the funds to pay for the art I would of but I am doing all of this by myself and I appreciate you for understanding that. I, myself, did not generate these scenes but a lot f folks are acting like I did. I'm using these backgrounds that just so happen to of been generated by AI for reference and edited by a different the artist. If the artist was trying to make money off them I can understand the frustration behind it. I wouldn't of paid if they were. 

Again I thank you for the support! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far. Makes me even more inspired to give readers who enjoy my imagination more to look forward too.