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Hi there! Instead of simply clicking stars in the rating, I'd love to give some feedback about your work. We invest lots of hours in this projects, so just a thumbs up or down is a bit unfair.

- First of all, these villains are fun. They have cool details and the descriptions are evocative. Almost all of them are a bit comedic or goofy. The urban fantasy theme is a bit weird, but a lot of times we need as DMs to take the antagonist seriously to give fear or mistery. Simply changing the names or a couple of details will do the trick, but it's the feeling I've got after reading the table. I'll introduce a couple of your ideas into my sessions of Vestigium.

- Then, using 5e tools like Homebrewery might scare anti-d&d people or confuse d&d users. Of course you can include "Milos Husk" in your fantasy campaign, but your work will have more personality with a custom format. :P

So, I don't want to rant and be very pesky on other's work. Those are my opinions. Make what you feel with them and keep the good work. <3 

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Thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

I'm glad my intentions came through so clearly, with the comedic elements. Modern isn't really a genre I write for much (95% of my commissions are 5e/PF2e, the other 5% sci-fi horror) so this was a nice departure for me. I'm not familiar with Vestigium, but you've piqued my interest. 

I'm new and not a great designer, so Homebrewery is the only tool I am familiar with at the moment, but if you know of any other resources I would love to get a recommendation or two! I do want to improve, and your constructive criticism was most welcome! Sincerely, thank you.

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To be sincere, this project is done with google docs.

I've been trying to learn Affinity Publisher. My "Habelas Hainas" is my first step that way.

Formating and editing is a hole new world. Have fun! :)