Hello there,
Just wanted to mention that some of the english translation doesn't show during Yvonne's phone call, the spanish version shows instead.
The main character says "No tienes nada que agradecer, te vere prompto." after Yvonne thanked him for spending time with her. Wich i understood i think, despite never learning spanish. Something along the lines of "No need to thank me, see you soon".
For the path i said i forgave her but did not want to meet, then changed my mind and agreed to meet, then said i can pick you up on my way to airport. I don't know if that's relevant, but maybe it could help you fix it.
Same goes with Mel visiting Lewis. Karen gets her purse then Valerie thanks Mel in spanish "Muchas Gracias" . Then thanks her again in english in a longer text.
Meeting Yvonne in the park -as a friend- she says she wanted to say more things yesterday and the MC answers "Bueno, creo que hoy no tenemos prisa.", i had no idea what that means, but google trad seems to think it means "Good, we're not in a hurry today"
Dorian talk with Mel at the restaurant : Dorian says "i won't inherit anything for you", it may be proper, not sure. I know for sure that "You won't inherit anything from me" works though.