Hello! I just wanted to say that I appreciate the effort put into this translation - the fact that it exists in the first place says something already -and I hope you guys can continue forward with the other chapters too!
That being said, in the current state, it might require some serious editing for this to be "legible" or "easier to read", I suppose.
The problem stems from the MTL used ( or the mtl website ) since the result is ... well, let's just say that it leaves to be desired.
I could try to help in some way by proofreading the translation, or perhaps you guys could use another website to MTL and then I could proofread it; that decision is yours to make, but I'll gladly help in any way i can.
Anyway, have a good one!