Seems a bit harsh for a story that's barely been started, and we can't really figure out what its intentions are yet.
also about the whole "who cares about everybody who died at all" I'd think they would explore how the characters feel more about that later, but I don't really know, you may be right.
I don't really mean to be rude about this and all but why do you feel so strongly that this game should be pushed down and not be seen? There's a lot of people that enjoy silly things like what your describing, and itch shouldn't be full of vn's that only you deem as "appropriate" or "well written." There are many worse ones, it's all just a matter of which ones are the better ones.
(You seem like an expert in this field, do you have experience writing vn's or stories? You give incredibly detailed reviews.)