Yes, here I am. Once again. Haha. Thanks for yet another title, be careful to not stretch yourself too thin tho...! Wouldn't want you with burnout of all things. That said, I'm glad you seem to be enthusiastic about trying other Undertale multiverses.
I'm writing this before actually playing it, and I've been wondering... What sort of feedback you might be looking for in your works? For example... If you want to hear about regarding the way the story is progressing, how the setting is presented, or any feedback regarding tone or pacing, or continuity (usually called high-level feedback)... Or if you would prefer mostly comments on scripting bugs (low level).
I realize you are most probably doing these both for fun and so you can develop your skills... Also, it's for the price of 0 for everyone, so I don't want to be overly critic of something someone might be doing as a way to relax and to share fun stories with others.
You see... One of my oldest high-school friends (still my friend to this day in fact) became my friend exactly because he was the one person willing to lay it on thick and seriously criticize some art pieces I did as a hobby back then. He's a writer nowadays haha. It was honestly what I wanted, receiving just praise becomes jarring after awhile and uh... It's like... You can't trust what people say? Like they are on repeat? Or just saying stuff to please you? It's weird. So yeah, I'm wondering where exactly you stand. I would be very happy in offering the same constructive honesty I received back then, if that's something you are looking for.
Otherwise, I'm more than happy to let a hobby just be your way to wind down haha! Just having fun with it is fine too, no judgments. We all need a place to just be ourselves and be free for a little while.
Again, thanks! Don't worry about replying too fast, take your time.
Hello!!
Yes, the fandom keeps me alive. It’s hard not to get inspired when every day I see someone else posting about something new or funny.
Re feedback - While I do this for fun, I do also want to improve. If there is something within my ability to change, then I want to. If you feel comfortable providing that level of feed back I would more than welcome it.
The only critiques I don’t want are suggestions of different choices that would lead to routes I don’t have planned. I want to complete my outline / main story first before I go and add branches.
Yeah, I understand that on a spiritual level. As I mentioned, I make some art stuff so, I totally understand how people trying to make your change course on something you are working on can be a little stressful/take some of the fun out of it... Especially when you are doing a specific piece for yourself just to try an idea or to relax. It's not even a commission or anything, in which case it would be completely fine. I mean, they are paying for it so they should get what they want, and I'm no clairvoyant haha. I'll do my best to be a good critic while letting you do your thing. It'll be an exercise for me too!
Well then, I'll be back eventually with my thoughts. As anything in life, take them with a grain of salt. Thanks for the reply once again!