Great visuals, was really intrigued. Story going along nicely, but dragging in chloe + BJ in the portal - pretty much made "The chosen one" feel like nothing. Was hoping they would be his friends "back home" when he goes to visit or something. Was a real bummer for me.
MC isn't chosen, the second his friends also gets "chosen" its nothing special at all. - if 3 people who knew each other all completed it, that would mean millions of people could get "chosen". The madam goes from a queen to an "aunt" - why doesn't she punish Chloe when she goes all "bitchmode" on her?
As said, great concept, the characters and wording are mostly really well written - but there's holes in the story that are hard to accept.